Maybe a poem a week was a better goal. Here is a draft of this week's, in all its cheesy glory:
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I stay up late, by candlelight
at the drafting window
I go more miles than I’m supposed to
and come back through night.
As long as the wax is warm
and pools in my palm I move
nimble-toed and taciturn.
In the sunlight mornings
with your warm apple skin
covering my hands, we suss all we can
of the sun, far into westering
sky, until there is nothing for it
except to lay, spent
and cold in the dirt.
You are caked with mud
and mast and all manner
of junk; l take you down to the river
wipe away the twigs and blood
from when I bit your lip,
tasted sugar, and couldn’t stop
until the salt dripped down my chin.
A passerby sees innocents, vexing nature
with our play-dams of twigs and spit
and I am thinking only of
taking myself a tall, cool drink of water.
Comb the winter from my hair
and put it away somewhere; I have
enough candle to get us back a time or two.
I’ll darn your dresses by candlelight
you hem my shirts far from the window-
draft; the distance is dour and slow going
when we're damning ourselves, to outrun the night.
2 comments:
hello poet...
you write very well...
I love this one. Well done. You have some beautiful imagery going on here. I especially like - "warm apple skin"
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